“Are you sentenced as a human zombie to your job?”
“Are you sentenced as a human zombie to your job?”
Great headline, eh? If you don’t capture your prospect’s imagination and attention with a great first sentence or headline … you don’t have a prospect. 
Always think hard about what your first sentence will be. Your career depends on it.
* “How ordinary people can afford a top-notch lawyer for only 83 cents a day.”
* “The 30-second change that burns excess fat all day.”
* “How a 23-year-old mail clerk earns more than the senior vice-president.”
* “See how 31 overworked secretaries started their own home-based businesses and took home a 33% raise.”
These are just a few ideas to get us thinking. More in our next issue.
Remember, first sentences are used by your competition. Everyone is vying for your prospect’s money.
Want to create your own custom first sentences and headlines?
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From Tom Big Al, thanks for the tips Tom.
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