“45 years of hard labor, and you didn’t even commit a crime!”
Great headline, eh?
If you don’t capture your prospect’s imagination and attention with a great first sentence or headline … you don’t have a prospect.
Always think hard about what your first sentence will be. Your career depends on it.
And now for some examples:
* “What would happen if you could quit your job?”
* “Put off wrinkles for another 10 years.”
* “Get a monthly bonus check and a full-time maid.”
* “How to lose two pounds a week and still eat all the ice cream you want.”
Remember, first sentences are used by your competition. Everyone is vying for your prospect’s money.
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Thanks for these great headlines tom.