“Don’t waste your life as a commuter!”
Great headline, eh?
If you don’t capture your prospect’s imagination and attention with a great first sentence or headline … you don’t have a prospect.
Always think hard about what your first sentence will be. Your career depends on it.
And now for some examples:
* “Health today … and tomorrow.”
* “10 reasons to quit your job immediately.”
* “How to call in well. (Well, I’m not coming in any more.)”
* “How to make your neighbors jealous every morning.”
* “Attention headache sufferers: Please read this.”
* “Take 4 inches off your waistline this month.”
* “Leave your boss a good-bye note.”
* “Reduce your taxes – just like the ultra-rich.”
Remember, first sentences are used by your competition. Everyone is vying for your prospect’s money.
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Wow more great headlines from Tom Big Al, thanks Tom Big Al.