“Are you sentenced as a ‘working zombie’ for your boss?”
“Are you sentenced as a ‘working zombie’ for your boss?”
Great headline, eh? If you don’t capture your prospect’s imagination and attention with a great first sentence or headline … you don’t have a prospect. 
Always think hard about what your first sentence will be. Your career depends on it.
* “Why your retirement years are doomed.”
* “Your body is talking. Are you listening?”
* “Quit your job now before it is too late.”
* “Make every Tuesday a payday.”
These are just a few ideas to get us thinking. More in our next issue.
Remember, first sentences are used by your competition. Everyone is vying for your prospect’s money.
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From Tom Big Al, a wonderful set of headlines
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